DD13HW4

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a8STUvNgX1mM7ABZa_ci6ID4IBJGq438eaL_C5Mm-Q8/edit

#1

Sentence before: Many skills are required in an engineering workplace, including the ability to work in a team and communicate with colleagues and supervisors.


S V/C Pattern
Original Sentence: Often these skills are missing or insufficiently developed in recent college graduates (Susan M. Katz).

Altered Sentence: Often these teamwork skills are blatantly missing or insufficiently developed in recent inexperienced college graduates

Sentence after: The addition of engineering courses that focus more on teamwork based projects rather than individual assignments will give students a stronger foundation on which they can build throughout their lives (Susan M. Katz).


#2

Sentence Before: Some Universities have even begun offering a minor in Engineering Communication.


S V/C Pattern
Original Sentence: This minor provides engineering undergraduates credentials and formal training in complementary performance skills necessary for success in today’s work space (E. Seat, et al).

Altered Sentence: This particular minor strongly provides inexperienced engineering undergraduates credentials and formal training in complementary performance skills necessary for success in today’s work space (E. Seat, et al).


Sentence Before: This interdisciplinary program is designed to improve the ability of engineering graduates to work in teams, be effective communicators, be socially adept, and to be prepared for leadership roles

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